Hey so I've recently come to this wikia to read about pages regarding Darling in the Franxx episodes in order to understand parts I didn't quite understand while watching it. However, I noticed that the plot summaries are VERY LONG. As an English major, this bugs me a lot. At the bare minimum, I have learned that summaries should only include points of the story/episode that are important to move or intrepret a story/character forward.
With the episode summaries, in which I noticed you mainly edited, have MANY small details that really don't need to be included. The pages written seem more like transcripts or notes on the occurnaces of the episode rather than a simple plot summary. I suggest that you please shorten them for the sake of readers wanting to understand and easily read through the plot rather than having to skim to a mass paragraph of uncessary details. Trust me, I used to do this before and have been criticized to hold back on the details for it many times so I'm not bashing you for it.
As a past admin for another wiki (Nisekoipedia), I've seen these problems before and had readers helped shorten and make them more clear for readers. I would like to be able to help you do this with other episode pages. I had actually been in the process of doing so, but I noticed that you reversed my edits. Please reconsider the edits I made.
Though I agree with most of your points, I'm confused about what you define as "important."
In the first episode, you removed the section that establishes the characters in the ship together, such as 081 being injured from riding with her, her wanting to swim in the ocean (which is important later in the episode and in a later episode), Hiro's interactions with the bird (though you added that it was "still alive" at one point), Mitsuru and Ichigo's reaction to Hiro leaving, etc.
Regarding your points, I put "throws a dead 081 out of her FRANXX" which indicates the impacts of riding with Zero Two. In my perspective, the ocean part isn't exactly important to the plot but rather a character trait/experience of Zero Two. It can be part of her character profile but not an episode summary. Having that detail doesn't really contribute to how the plot moves forward. I do agree with the bird experience with Hiro. I overlooked it I guess, but I do believe that part should have been shortened. About the group's reaction to Hiro leaving, I just summed it up by stating how the group "wonder[ed] the fate of Hiro after his failure in the Parasite program". Having every single detail of what each character said about Hiro regarding this situation was too long. If a reader wanted to know the entire conversation of the group about this situation, it would have been easier for them to watch that scene rather than simply read it off a summary.