Thread:Mai Is Me/@comment-26398009-20180624015359/@comment-4059391-20180624041123

Though I agree with most of your points, I'm confused about what you define as "important." In the first episode, you removed the section that establishes the characters in the ship together, such as 081 being injured from riding with her, her wanting to swim in the ocean (which is important later in the episode and in a later episode), Hiro's interactions with the bird (though you added that it was "still alive" at one point), Mitsuru and Ichigo's reaction to Hiro leaving, etc.