Thread:Mai Is Me/@comment-26398009-20180624015359/@comment-26398009-20180624043056

Regarding your points, I put "throws a dead 081 out of her FRANXX" which indicates the impacts of riding with Zero Two. In my perspective, the ocean part isn't exactly important to the plot but rather a character trait/experience of Zero Two. It can be part of her character profile but not an episode summary. Having that detail doesn't really contribute to how the plot moves forward. I do agree with the bird experience with Hiro. I overlooked it I guess, but I do believe that part should have been shortened. About the group's reaction to Hiro leaving, I just summed it up by stating how the group "wonder[ed] the fate of Hiro after his failure in the Parasite program". Having every single detail of what each character said about Hiro regarding this situation was too long. If a reader wanted to know the entire conversation of the group about this situation, it would have been easier for them to watch that scene rather than simply read it off a summary.